Developmental Editing

Your story elevated.

Developmental editing perfects the most important element of your story - structure. 


The right story structure, the right progression from beginning, middle, to end is what hooks your reader. 

  • Does your global story demonstrate a clear plot and character arc? 

  • Does each scene move from one status quo to another; does this movement track with the evolution of your core conflict and controlling idea? 


  • Is your theme clear, and clearly proven at the end? 

  • How do you deploy the elements of fiction - character, conflict, plot, setting, dialogue, and so on? 

These questions and plenty more are the principles of structure.  Hub Edits will make sure your story gets them right.

Developmental Editing

You will receive:

  • A markup of your manuscript with extensive notes ranging from line edits to in-depth story analysis

  • An Editorial Letter that lists all developmental edits and provides a comprehensive discussion of each one

  • Email, telephone, and video conference support to discuss all editorial suggestions in detail and help you revise your story in an ongoing fashion